enot06: (Default)
[personal profile] enot06
Jill and her hubby met Enrique on their course during a horseback ride. They were happy to practice their Spanish. Enrique was fluent in English but he was patient as they struggled to put the words together. He was riding his own horse - quite different from the horses they got at the resort. He impressed them with good looks, untanned skin, the way he was controlling his horse and the way he talked. When Enrique invited them for Sunday brunch at his hacienda they agreed.

He picked them up at resort on Sunday noon. When they arrived, everything was prepared for grilling. His wife dressed in clothes resembling of Frida Kahlo's pictures cordially welcomed them. Home-baked tortilla chips with homemade salsa were delicious. Enrique started mixing margaritas and put the beef and vegetables on fire.
Two hours later Jill found herself at the fazenda entrance with Enrique’s hands under her shirt.
- You can’t do it in front of everyone.
- I believe it’s possible that no one will know.
Jill went upstairs to the bathroom without saying anything. – Do you have a condom? – she asked when Enrique closed the bathroom door. He actually did, right there in the medicine cabinet. Then Jill came downstairs and Enrique joined everyone few minutes later.
Usually it takes people more than 10 minutes all in all, so there were no questions asked.

Date: 2007-05-16 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
you have to be sick

no, accutually I can give you an idea
you can change it like this:

Jill and her hubby met Enrique...
Two hours later her hubby found himself at the fazenda entrance with Enrique’s hands under his shirt. But Jill was still there. So... nothing really happend.

Date: 2007-05-16 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brevi.livejournal.com
"Опасаясь контрразведки,
подражая дуре-Светке,
под английским псевдонимом..."

Date: 2007-05-17 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enot.livejournal.com
Ась?

Date: 2007-05-17 12:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brevi.livejournal.com
"...Мистер Джон Ланкастер Пэк"

Date: 2007-05-17 01:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enot.livejournal.com
"Враг не ведал, дурачина: тот, кому все поручил он,
Был чекист, майор разведки и прекрасный семьянин."

А к чему это было?

Date: 2007-05-17 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brevi.livejournal.com
Так, мутный поток моих ассоциаций.

Date: 2007-05-17 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enot.livejournal.com
А если я скажу, что эта история без начала и конца не имеет к моей жизни никакого отношения, но вместе с тем не придумана, поток прекратится?

Date: 2007-05-17 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brevi.livejournal.com
Я ничего подобного и не предполагал. Имелось в виду, что нарративный жанр "супружеская измена, вид изнутри" уже достаточно подмочен.

P.S. Поток ассоциаций вряд ли прекратится, уж извини. Поток комментариев -- другое дело. Уже.

Date: 2007-05-17 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enot.livejournal.com
Если бы там не было супруга героини, ничего бы не изменилось. Какие-нибудь другие люди толпились бы у стола. Никакой разницы.
Извини, это я додумываю, в чем суть. Это не рассказ про измену. Это рассказ про 10 минут.

Date: 2007-05-17 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dklein.livejournal.com
долго ли, умеючи? умеючи - долго :)

Date: 2007-05-18 06:30 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
10 min -- долго? скоро?
Где аршин?

Date: 2007-05-18 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dklein.livejournal.com
а Вы мужчина или женщина?

Profile

enot06: (Default)
enot06

January 2026

S M T W T F S
    123
45 678910
11121314151617
18192021222324
25262728293031

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jan. 16th, 2026 11:32 am
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios